Choose one of the thesis statements you wrote in your journal for the lesson "Developing a Thesis," and in your journal write one paragraph in which you recognize the opposition and refute it.

Answer and Explanation:

Thesis statement: The adoption of school uniforms is beneficial.

While my opponent's claim that the adoption of school uniforms limits each student's individuality is considerable, I must emphasize that school uniforms allow students to be identified outside of school, providing protection for the integrity of those students if a problem occurs with them . To reinforce my argument, I would like to propose an example: let's say that after school hours, a student from our school, when returning home, suffers an accident and needs to be hospitalized. Medical teams would need to contact the student's family. This would be optimized if the student was wearing the school uniform, as the medical team would know the school to which the student belongs and would contact the school quickly, to obtain essential data on how to contact the student's family.