The writer wants sentence 10 (reproduced below) to provide a logical, vivid description of the experience of reading with an e-reader. I would read quickly, seeing page after page of disembodied text, words flashing by me on a screen—I often felt overwhelmed.

Which of the following versions of sentence 10 most effectively accomplishes this goal?

(As it is now)
A

I read quickly, words flashed by me on a screen, I saw page after page of disembodied text, and I felt overwhelmed often.
B

I often felt overwhelmed; I quickly read the words that flashed by me on a screen and I saw page after page of disembodied text.
C

Words flashing by me on a screen because I would read quickly; I saw page after page of disembodied text, so I often felt overwhelmed.
D

I would read quickly—I saw page after page of disembodied text—and I often felt overwhelmed, because I had words flashing by me on a screen.
E