Which is the most appropriate choice for a museum caption?

1. this sketch by james mcneill whistler is of john ross key in the coast survey office in washington dc in 1854 it is a beautiful rendering of francis scott key's nephew although it would be better if the child's drawing was more visible

2. this black-and-white is a sketch of john ross key by james mcneill whistler from 1854 the young drafts man who is in the coast survey office in washington dc is related to francis scott key who wrote the lyrics for the best song in history

3. this is a sketch by james mcneill whistler john ross key in the coast survey office in washington dc in 1854 he who was the nephew of francis scott key was a draftsman in the office at the time of the drawing

4.this is a black and white sketch of a young boy who is drawing and it was made by james mcneill whistler the kid a draftsman was the nephew of francis scott key the guy who wrote the national anthem