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In contour drawings crossing lines is one way to indicate this

Describe a religion that is not your own. choose from one of the following religions: ancient egyptian belief, hinduism, greek or roman polytheism, native american religion, buddhism, taoism, judaism, christianity, or islam. you must choose a religion that is not your own. describe three features or tenets of the chosen religion. mention any written works and prophets. share how this religion compares to your religion or beliefs, even if you do not have a chosen "religion."

In what ways were berlin's songs expressions of continuity in american culture? in what ways did they signify change in american culture?