Can you check my song im trying to become a song writer thank you byee The songs called don't cry

Don’t cry
By Richard

When you were sad told me to hope in bed with you
You told me I was the only one who made you feel happy
I love you baby hope you see that cleary

You say please don’t cry
I’ll be by your side
You say please don’t cry
It will be alright
You say please don’t cry
I’ll be by your side

Baby why you had end it
I should have been there for you
You Kept a rope in your bag
You took it out and told me wait outside of your room
Walked in and saw you hanging
I knew you been cutting gave you my love
Now I cry myself to sleep and wish it was me instead

You say please don’t cry
I’ll be by your side
You say please don’t cry
It will be alright
You say please don’t cry
I’ll be by your side

You kept vaping to feel ok
Baby I miss you wish I had paid better attention
When you didn't talk to me that day
You kept saying you were fine I knew that was cap
Just wish you went to me for help
Baby now your dead

You say please don’t cry
I’ll be by your side
You say please don’t cry
It will be alright
You say please don’t cry
I’ll be by your side