Does this look realistic enough for an art teacher?

Can somebody write me a summary of the war in iraq? you.

Nstrumental music that supports the main part(s) chamber music 2. a large group of instruments usually including woodwinds, brass, and percussion band 3. music written for small ensembles for an intimate setting accompaniment 4. a person who leads an ensemble conductor 5. an electronic keyboard capable of multiple instrument sounds

Does anyone know how to get better at drawing? (any advice is welcome and needed)