How to critique this a photograph I need a paragraph please I need help

To fix this photograph I would do a couple things. First, I would change the backround. For a wedding photoshoot it should look happy and pretty, for example a flower field or a nice building, not a run-down nasty building. I would also change the fact that the bride isn't looking at the camera. Another thing I would do, which is unnessary but might look better, is pose the couple differently. The photographer made the groom more focused on so I would change their positions to distribute the main focus. I do, however, like the candidness of the shot.

Explanation:

My mom's a photographer, so yeah.

Hope this helps! :)

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