Tell me want it needs i want to hold you tight i want to hold you close do you have to go home tonight stay here we can stay up and play fight i want to kiss you lips and put my hand on your back and lay next to you all night do you have to go home tonight I want you to be mine girl i want to hold your hand walking thought the park and carry you when you dont want to walk say i love after every fight let me love you right

Since this is just "tell me what it needs" I will say this is pretty good

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i want to hold you tight.i want to hold you close. i want to make their wrongs right. your as precious as a rose. Do you have to go home tonight? i want to kiss your lips and so lets make a toast. stay here we can stay up, play fight, maybe even take a small doze.i want my hands to run along your back i want to lay next to you to be with you all night. i feel like a ghost.i want you here with me to be entangled in each others arms to sleep until we must rise.i want to hold your hand cherish it, this is all i knowsi want to carry you when your legs fail you i want to hold you when you are truly falling apart.i promise i will love you after everything every fight, downside, evil that must come.now let me love you right. and while i lay next to you and kiss your face i know this is truly my favorite place to be and stay for all of time because right now i hope to make you mine. so ill kiss the tip of your nose and hold you as close as i can. so you will never need another man.

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also whoever u wrote this too awww so cute and if u dont like what i wrote thats totally fine she will love it anyways.