My Friend is writing a story and she wants feedback Heart break Frappe

By Emily

Dear Diary, My boy friend che ated on me

The day it happened Emma told me it would be a disaster. It was the night of the Winter Formal and we were getting ready for the best party ever. “Seriously Ava, this party’s going to be horrible”, said Emma applying her eyeshadow. “Uh no way”, I replied putting on my new earrings “And plus, I have a hot date”

My boy friend, me and Emma were going to the dance together. Emma sadly doesn’t have a date because she thinks she’s ugly but she’s absolutely beautiful.