Okay so i need a peer review on an art project...let me know what you think of this please

beautiful I live it its great

i feel like you should maybe try and get rid of the red lines as much as you can, the hair is equal on both sides which is good, however it would seem as if the things pointing out are supposed to be strands of hair? i think you should make those lines a bit slimmer and use more, the over all look is good though! better than alot of people could do actually. im proud of you.

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i'm not too sure - if you could attach the picture