subject
Arts, 03.03.2022 20:00 StrangerMo

WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST IF RIGHT Read the rough draft of a student’s conclusion to an argumentative editorial. (1) Year-round schooling would help student achievement. (2) Not so much information would have to be crammed into nine months. (3) Furthermore, the elimination of long breaks, particularly summer break, would significantly reduce "learning loss” and the additional time wasted at the beginning of each academic year to reteach previously learned material. (4) It is clear that year-round schooling helps students learn and retain more. (5) The United States is not the only country to experiment with a year-round school schedule. (6) Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and see that students in these schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars. (7) It is about time that we replaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.

Which revision would most improve sentence 7?

suggesting an alternative plan to replace the current school calendar

explaining why the current school calendar is outdated and inefficient

expressing an opinion about those who oppose changing the calendar

restating the strongest piece of evidence used to support the claim

ansver
Answers: 2

Another question on Arts

question
Arts, 24.06.2019 09:00
Write an art critique of edvard munch, separation 1986
Answers: 3
question
Arts, 24.06.2019 22:30
Which aesthetic theory do you art teachers used to grade their students
Answers: 1
question
Arts, 26.06.2019 06:30
What kind of rhythmic notes are these a- fourth b-quater c-sixteenth d-eighth
Answers: 2
question
Arts, 26.06.2019 16:40
Why do you think shooting in raw format would be better for capturing shades of green in the image? (photographic basics)
Answers: 3
You know the right answer?
WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST IF RIGHT Read the rough draft of a student’s conclusion to an argumentative edi...
Questions
question
Mathematics, 09.12.2020 17:50
question
SAT, 09.12.2020 17:50
question
Mathematics, 09.12.2020 17:50
Questions on the website: 13722359