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hi, can you correct this conclusion for my essay (structure/voc./gramar/ponctuation :

to sum up, although there are two sides to a coin , i believe that mobile phones generally do improve the quality of our life and i'm concerned that those multi-tools should be used worldwide nowadays. and in my estimation, the pros outweigh the cons.

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Which is the main claim in "say no to library cuts"? a. the most important effects of the library cuts will not be limited to children, senior citizens, or other specific groups. b. the budget cuts at the library also mean the end of the children's story hour. c. according to library director sarah tomlinson, whom i interviewed on may 6, the budget cuts will force the library to discontinue many popular programs and services. d. the funding of the public library should be protected because the library offers important programs and services that benefit the whole community.