Rewrite this thesis statement to make it precise. football is an expensive sport.

The meaning of this is to elaborate it more so you need to write something like this: "Football is a expensive sport it requires a lot of gear, and time in order to play not mentioning buying equipment, and driving to games, and practices." A thesis statement is your argument on a conflict what you think is right on a argument.

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A thesis statement consists of one or two sentences that reflect your position on the main idea or topic of the essay; this part of the essay should be as clear and as specific as possible, thus general facts and vague words and sentences (such as Football is an expensive sport) are not allowed. Some ways in which we can rewrite this thesis statement to make it precise are the following:

Football costs the United States more than a hundred $billion dollars each year, a cost that, according to the statistic seems to be worth it.

With the average cost for equipping a youth American football player being around five hundred dollars, Football is one of the most expensive sports.

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