Plz how can i add a description of the mans face to this paragraph? the room was dimly lit and i could barely make out the faces of each of the men in the room. however, i could make out the face of a man sitting across the circle bar from me looking in my direction. by his uniform i could tell that he was a lieutenant commander. the other men at the bar seemed to be unimportant to him, and he continued to focus his gaze towards me. this left me wondering why he would he be staring at me because his fascination seemed to be never ending.

In the second sentence where you have "I could make out the face of a man...", you could add "I could make out the rugged, stern, and dirtied face of a man...".

But with whatever describers you need.

- "when these words are put together to convey a meaning it is known as a sentence. a sentence is a group of words that makes complete sense. placing of words in a sentence is very important. the second sentence is a question."

third person

explanation:

note the usage of names and pronouns, "james" & "the old man". this alone can confirm it as third person, as first person uses "i" and the like, while second person uses "you" and the like.

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