Marconi expanded on morse's invention of the telegraph but he also changed media forever by using the wireless telegraph to transmit sound in 1907 turning radio into a business venture, which paved the way for the corporate media we know today reducing the cost of building transatlantic telegraph wires using morse's telegraph to transmit the letter "s" across the atlantic ocean

Turning radio into a business venture, which paved the way for the corporate media we know today.

Explanation:

Guglielmo Marconi was the inventor of the radio, and for his invention, he won the Nobel Prize in physics in 1909 (shared with Karl Ferdinand Braun). However, Marconi was also an entrepreneur and businessman, and he founded The Wireless Telegraph & Signal Company in the United Kingdom in 1897. This company would later become the Marconi Company. This business venture would launch radio as a commercial success, leading to the corporate media we know today.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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