Hey guys, i'm writing a causal analysis on suicide awareness and i'm struggling to form a topic and thesis for it. the topic i am thinking about is "why we should be raising suicide awareness." i feel like it could use improvement and i also have no idea how i should write up my thesis. in my paper i want to talk about causes of suicide and possible means of prevention. any ideas? in advance!

Ya this is great. Suicide is often viewed as a hard condition while the person who is suffering with in, has a hard rough time in life that makes them think that their live is worth ending. Listen to that again, Life is not worth ending it is a gift you are here today here. I been through this and hard time I just now that I have to keep trying to not give up because If I do I will not have been doing what I truly wanted. I want to be happy it is not easy since I care so much what people think about me and that grows to a pressure you feel you can’t no more.It is all your mind try to control it to be positive.

The title is good but If you put more emotion like “ Hard negativity is not a game it is a challenge we must fight “ something between this. I can have made a better one by but I have a lot in mind. Make it like a story movie and put your self in this position as me will help you bring all this together.

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to and without are prepositions, so a, b, and d are prepositional phrases. the adverb phrase is c, about the surprise.

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