Read this example of incorrect sentence structure. gino is starring in the school play, it opens next week. which revision best corrects the sentence?

The incorrect sentence structure in this example derives from the unclear use of the pronoun “it”. It is not clear to whom or to what it refers to. It is worth mentioning, you have to be sure that pronouns and their antecedents agree in number and gender.

Sentence:  Gino is starring in the school play, it (what?) opens next week.

Revision: The school is opening next week and Gino is starring in the school play.

The school play Gino is starring in, opens next week.

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in ray bradbury's short story "a sound of thunder", mr. eckels's fearfulness leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.

in the story, mr. eckels, who is a hunter, hires a time travel company to travel to the age of dinosaurs. although he is excited for the hunting expedition at the beginning, when they reach there and mr. eckels sees the tyrannosaurus, he feels frightened. as he is afraid of the tyrannosaurus, he steps off the path although he has been warned not to do it. by stepping off the path, the entire course of the future is affected: mr. eckart alters the future by stepping on a butterfly, which causes a new man to be elected president in the future. in that way, it is mr. eckart's fearfulness what triggers 'the butterfly effect' and what leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.