The child was staring out through the open window with a dazed horror in her eyes. in a chill shock of nameless fear framton swung round in his seat and looked in the same direction. which phrase from these sentences contributes most to the sense of surprise?

dazed in horror in her eyes would be your answer

"a dazed horror in her eyes"

Explanation:

The sentence starts with a regular tone describing what the child doing: "staring out through the open window". At this point the reader is just picturing a child doing exactly that, but with the use of the preposition "with" includes an interesting detail that drastically changes the scenario. This child is not just harmlessly staring out the window but she is doing so "with a dazed horror in her eyes," this is the turning point where we see how this element of surprise alters the entire perspective and expectation the reader has about this story from now on.

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