Read the following short paragraph. this paragraph is full of short, choppy sentences. use your knowledge of sentence variety and prepositional phrases to improve the paragraph. include all of the details in your revised version. the clouds seemed to loom over the field. the field was near my house. a drop of rain fell on the infield dirt. the umpire looked into the sky. the sky opened up. a downpour of rain scattered everyone. people ran into the concession stand. other people ran to their cars in the parking lot. the parking lot was behind the outfield.

100 points and ! plz answer ! think of an intense argument you had or witnessed sometime in your life. close your eyes and remember every detail. to turn this into a dramatic scene you will need to make changes that will make it make more sense to the audience. 500-600 words a description of the set up that explains what happened before the scene diction that matches the characters character objectives and obstacles are clearly conveyed a scene that escalates in dramatic intensity diction that is appropriate to the audience words that are not wasted in idle chit chat action (stage directions) that enhance the scene proper formatting for drama

Explain the effect of the rhetorical questins for the below paragraph."i pinched myself: was i still alive? was i awake? how was it possible that men, women, and children were beiing burned and that the world kept silent? no. all this could not be real. a nightmare soon i would wake up with a start, my heart pounding, and find that i waas back in the room of my childhood, with my "

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