Can someone check and me make my essay better its about discussing their experience working at texas health tech institute doing blood drives, health majors such as medical assistant, medical technology billing, answering phone calls, and analyzing data as it relates to sociology.

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volunteering at the texas health tech institute. medical healthcare aspect of (the study of how people act towards each other) is simple but complex of studies of the effects of social and cultural factors on health and medicine. there specialists as a medical (expert at how groups of people relate to each other) is to people view the healthcare system as facility of the (community of people/all good people in the world) and serve it by examining and improving all its parts/faces. it is a big step towards to (accomplish or gain with effort) the greatest major's opportunities in the history of medical careers.

medical (expert at how groups of people relate to each other) applies (related to careful studying or deep thinking) and (related to thinking a lot about what things mean to you) skills to the healthcare facilities improve the conditions of patients and people (who take care of people). this may be through conducting research on the social factors affecting healthcare, providing education to people (who take care of people) and working with people to prevent sicknesses and speed up the recovery processes. it combines both medicinal and people-based aspects to offer effective solutions. the (the study of how people act towards each other) of health and illness focuses on the social effects of, and public attitudes toward, sicknesses, sicknesses, mental health and disabilities. this sub-field also overlaps with (the study of getting old) and the study of the (old/allowing to get old/getting older) process.

medical (the study of how people act towards each other), very differently, focuses on the inner-workings of medical organizations and medicine-based institutions. in britain, (the study of how people act towards each other) was introduced into the medical (school courses) following the good enough report (1944). [1]medical do regular medicine-based and (related to managing and running a company or organization) responsibilities under the immediate supervision of a doctor or other healthcare professional. medical do many (related to managing and running a company or organization) responsibilities, including answering phones, greeting patients, updating and charging patients' medical records, filling out policy varieties, managing agreement, planning assignments, arranging for hospital (act of letting someone enter/speaking the truth about something bad) and laboratory services, and handling billing and book keeping.