Type your response in the box. the following text contains an unclear pronoun. explain why the sentences aren’t clear. then rewrite the sentences to correct the unclear pronoun. michelle ran into mrs. jones on the street. she was returning from the library.

The sentences are unclear since the pronoun “she” can refer either to “Michelle” or “Mrs. Jones”.  

The correct sentence to avoid confusion with the pronoun could be:

“Michelle, who was returning from the library, ran into Mrs. Jones on the street."

In this case, we added a nonrestrictive clause that provides additional information to the main sentence (“who was returning from the library”).  

animal farm, written by george orwell, is a representation of russia after the revolution that led stalin to take over power.

in this excerpt, the central idea seems to be that the animals (a representation of society), when they believe to be working for a greater good and equality, are obedient and productive. they were convinced that, after expelling the owner (jones) from the farm, they would live in harmony and be fairly treated.

as we know, the pigs become the leaders and grow more selfish and dictatorial with time. in the end, they look and act in a way so similar to humans that it is impossible to tell the difference. the ideals of equality are shattered, and the farm turns out to be worse than it was before. the animals are manipulated with false propaganda and forced to work in order to enrich the pigs.