Read the paragraph that deepak wrote to explain how he used a checklist to revise his paper. i checked my transitions to make sure they made sense. i also reread my sentences to determine whether they were too similar in style and length. i fixed a couple to add variety. i found one or two words that needed extended definitions and added them. i made sure that i summarized all research evidence throughout the paper. besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can deepak do to strengthen his paper? he should try to keep all of his sentences the same length. he should use more than one technique to integrate his evidence. he should make sure he has a transition for every sentence in the paper. he should avoid extended definitions that provide too much information.

The answer is C He should make sure he has a transition for every sentence in the paper.

The answer is D.  He should avoid extended definitions that provide too much information.

Explanation:

Deepak has made all the revisions and also fixed necessary for; vocabulary, sentences, so that is the reason why the first and third option cannot be possible, as according to him, this is already done. On the other hand, we do not know "his technique" so, we cannot talk about it deeply and this is why the second option isn't possible either. Almost in the last part of the paragraph, Deepak mentions that he has found one or two words that needed extended definitions and  has added them; nevertheless, he doesn't mention if he has or hasn't provided too much information for those definitions exactly, so this is what he should do besides all the revisions listed: avoid extended definitions that provide too much information.

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