So i'm writing an essay and i would like someone to proof read and edit it. the intoduction is suppised to be grabbing, but im not aure if i made it too long.

I wouldn't repeat sudden.

I would take out was, it isn't needed because you explained your actions in the previse sentence

found instead of find

However, you hear the noise a second time. Louder than the first.

That's a start.  I would look up how to write a correct MLA style paper

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your answer will be

abstemious.

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the answer to number one is b the answer to number to is a