We were not regularly allowance or food was coarse cornmeal boiled this was called much it was put into a large wooden tray or trough and sat down upon the ground the children were then called the like so many pigs and like so many pigs they would come and devour the mush how does the objective style of this excerpt add power to the story and it uses a simile that refers to the children as pigs to avoid sentimentality

d.) then bernice winced as marjorie tossed her own hair over her shoulders and began to twist it slowly into two long blond braids until in her cream-colored negligée she looked like a delicate painting of some saxon princess. fascinated, bernice watched the braids grow. heavy and luxurious they were, moving under the supple fingers like restive snakes—and to bernice remained this relic and the curling iron and a to-morrow full of eyes.

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