"i have a few pointers i would like to share about how to benefit the most from the experience." which best replaces "a few pointers" to create a more formal style in this sentence? a. some tips b. a couple ideas c. some suggestions d. a solution

Hello,

I believe the best option would be option C) Some suggestions

Option A would work, but it wouldn't be as formal to say "I have some tips." Option B would also work but it suggests that all you have is ideas, not really some suggestions or solutions. Option D would not work because you don't have a solution. You only have some suggestions.

- I.A -

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

you're welcome ; p

"get off of your lazy bum and come running with me or i'm dumping this pitcher of water on u " u say with a smile. she thinks your joking so she ignores you about 10 seconds later shes screaming wile water is dripping everywhere you say "here comes the second one! " then you here her say okay, your such a j e r k ! ill be ready in 5 put the pitcher down " she say in an angry tone. and you smile in victory

good enough?