Giving brainliest and 200 points urgent only 5 questions

(1) “come on. (2) don’t be a baby,” brandy taunted as i stood facing the spin-out, the scariest and most fastest ride at the carnival. (3) my heart sank as i muttered, “it can’t be that bad….” (4) at that moment, a thought popped into my head that caused me to become hesitant and scared. (5) “if i don’t do it, she’ll make fun of me for the rest of my life.” (6) there was no way i was going to allow that to happen. (7) my hands started to shake like maracas, and i gulped down my fear. (8) i push brandy aside dramatically and stated, “i’m going to do it. (9) i’m going to ride the spin-out.”

(10) as i trudged towards my seat, i could feel my palms getting sweaty and my heart starting to race. (11) i climbed in and buckled up. (12) my heart felt like it was going to beat right out of my chest. (13) i peered out of the corner of my eye and saw the man push the button on the machine. (14) before i knew it, i was being lifted off my feet. (15) “don’t look down. (16) it’s a long way to the ground,” i muttered to myself. (17) i closed my eyes clutched my hands tightly to the metal bar, and took a deep breath. (18) when i opened my eyes, i was upside down! (19) my heart sank, and i started to shriek. (20) i was spinning faster and faster with every breath i took. (21) after a while, the ride started to gradually slow down, and then it finally came to a stop. (22) as i took my first steps off the ride, i could barely walk without stumbling.

(23) my head was spinning, but i couldn’t get my mind off the fact that i did it! (24) all around me people were laughing. (25) i didn’t even notice. (26) i was too caught up in the fact that i actually rode the spin-out. (27) “i’m not such a baby now, huh? ” i boasted to brandy while smiling. (28) as we continued to walk through the carnival, my smile grew even bigger. (29) these few moments will forever be in my mind because i faced my fear and conquered it. (30) i proved to myself and brandy that i was not scared of a little carnival ride.

question 1
what change, if any, is needed in sentence 2?

a)delete the comma after baby
b)insert a comma after the taunted
c)delete the word most
d)make no change

question 2
what change is needed in sentence 8?

a)insert quotation marks after "it"
b)change push to pushed
c)insert a comma after dramatically
d)changed aside to a side

question 3
what change, if any, is needed in sentence 17?

a)insert a comma after eyes.
b)change breath to breathe
c)delete the comma after bar
d)make no change

question 4
what is the best way to combine sentence 24 and sentence 25?

a)all around me people were laughing, but i didn’t even notice the people were laughing.
b)all around me people were laughing; and i didn't even notice.
c)all around me people were laughing that i didn't even notice
d)all around me people were laughing, but i didn't even notice.

question 5
michelle would like to add the following sentence to her paper.
[as we went up, my heart jumped into my throat.]

where is the best place to insert the sentence?

a)after sentence 9
b)after sentence 13
c)after sentence 14
d)after sentence 17