With rewriting sentences

rewrite these sentences correctly.

11. julio parked the car in the garage and cleaned it.

12. mom returned the movie from megan that she forgot at our house.

The correct way of rewriting the sentences provided is:

11. Julio parked and cleaned the car in the garage.

12. Mom returned Megan's movie, which she forgot at our house.

Explanation: The first sentence ("Julio parked the car in the garage and cleaned it") needs to be corrected because the pronoun "it" has an ambiguous reference, that is to say it could refer to "the car" or to "the garage". In that way, it is necessary to put the verb "cleaned" after the verb "parked" in order to convey information clearly, avoid using the pronoun "it" and clarify that the object of the verb "cleaned" is "the car". On the other hand, the sentence "Mom returned to movie from Megan that she forgot at our house" also needs to be corrected since the genitive case should be used when trying to indicate possession instead of using the preposition "from". Moreover, in the sentence provided, the antecedent of "that" should be "movie" and not "Megan". Therefore, the correct way of rewriting this sentence is "Mom returned Megan's movie, which she forgot at our house".

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