Which is the next step after you write a first draft

After writing a draft, begin to write your essay.

You can reword some things. Rix grammar as you say/read your draft.

the first draft the edited draft then the final draft  

for me i cant do homework without music, so, i guess i would say faster with it, than without it. for me at least.

the central idea is basically saying that juveniles that have committed a crime will not have the same consequences as the   adults that have. they will have a softer punishment than what the adults have that is harsh in some ways.