Which sentence should be revised to reduce wordiness

D

Reasoning: There were many words that were not useful and it could of been shorter in my opinion.

The sentence that should be revised to reduce wordiness is D. The speech that the computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was filled with information and was also very entertaining.

Explanation:

Wordiness refers to taking more words than necessary to make a point. Since the excess of words could clutter writing, wordiness should be reduced in some sentences, such as sentence D. The speech that the computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was filled with information and was also very entertaining. Possible improvement: The speech that the computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was very informative and entertaining.

b. brooks wrote about the same type of neighborhood in which she grew up.

#1  sara was always tasked with selecting birthday presents for her friends and family because everyone admired her  impeccable taste. 

impeccable (adj): perfect, flawless

#2  they moved to the united states many years ago, but their  insular  attitudes made it difficult for them to socialize. 

insular (adj): isolated; separate

#3  the professor explained the  semantic  relationship between the two nouns used in the sentence. 

semantic (adj): related to words or the meanings of words 

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