Hey i'm making a song can someone tell me what they think about this as the chores?

i wish i could walk away and leave it all behind me
go to another world where no one can find me
thats how i just want to escape it
i wish i could look at my past hold on to the good and throw the rest in the trash
thats how i want to escape it
thats how i wish i could escape it

Very deep meaning, love it! I am not entirely sure of the rhythm of this song, so I won't be able to help as much. I have a few suggestions, but you don't have to use them.

The third line, "that's how I just want to escape it" could be "that's how I want to hide it"

The fourth line, "I wish I could look at my past hold on to the good and throw the rest in the trash" could be "from all the things that brought me down I can't even fight it"

The next lines could be "just take a look at my past, tell me why I can't leave it"

"I just want to find that paradise of peace"

"Through all these tragic memories they keep on bringing pieces"

"That's how I want to leave it"

"That's how I wish to leave it"

i really dont know

explanation:

uncanny would be like unlucky or disaster. you can look for more in the dictionary or if you have text book then turn to a. 17 but it's different with textbooks.