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i need revising my illustration paragraph. my teacher assigned me a 150 point assignment! that requires me to revise my paragraph about a girl i was partnered up with. i’m really bad at sentence structure so if u can, me make a lot of good revision that will make this a a.

Some things that you could do is you could break this big long paragraph into 2 paragraphs so it doesn't seem boring to the reader. Maybe use more transition words to make seem very good, and check if you good vocabulary.

But other than that it's just information about your partner so you don't need to go all out on this assignment.

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normally working animals are domesticated and ruled by a master, a domesticator (tamer), to perform basic and important functions on a farm, for example. the value used in this context is animal labor in exchange for food. it is not so much a contrast to the story told by napoleon and the pigs, since the animals of that particular farm also performed functions on the farm through domestication. the only thing is that in this case, who rules them is a pig, also an animal, but very respected, to whom the other animals lent him submission. that's about a strong relationship of dependency between animal and owner.

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