Jalen is writing a paragraph about his experience at an adventure camp. below is his topic sentence.

last summer i had so much fun going to an adventure camp.

which sentence best refines jalen’s topic sentence?

1. adventure camp is where you get to do exciting things you’ve never done before.
2. i fell off a horse, got a rash from touching poison ivy, and was homesick most of the time.
3. even though at first i had fun, i got homesick when i was injured while rafting.
4. next year at adventure camp, i will be more careful when i go rafting.

1. Adventure camp is where you get to do exciting things you’ve never done before.

the anecdote makes readers feel sorry for the man’s lack of heritage, then reminds readers that the man has an equally valuable heritage.

in ray bradbury's short story "a sound of thunder", mr. eckels's fearfulness leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.

in the story, mr. eckels, who is a hunter, hires a time travel company to travel to the age of dinosaurs. although he is excited for the hunting expedition at the beginning, when they reach there and mr. eckels sees the tyrannosaurus, he feels frightened. as he is afraid of the tyrannosaurus, he steps off the path although he has been warned not to do it. by stepping off the path, the entire course of the future is affected: mr. eckart alters the future by stepping on a butterfly, which causes a new man to be elected president in the future. in that way, it is mr. eckart's fearfulness what triggers 'the butterfly effect' and what leads to drastic consequences for the rest of the world.