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review the following essay.

which pair of sentences needs to be revised?

a- living in centerville centerville is a good place to live because it has great schools and a welcoming community.

b- centerville’s schools are excellent with wonderful teachers. the schools have excellent teachers who are experts in their fields.

c- in addition, students can pick from a wide variety of sports and other activities. centerville’s schools are so respected that students from other towns come here for a good education.

d-centerville is also well-known for its warm and friendly citizens. indeed, my family and i have made a lot of dear friends here.

e- in short, centerville offers the best of small town american life. nowhere else will you find so many fun things to do and so many wonderful people who care about you.