Read the following paragraph.

students attending schools with mandatory uniform policies experience less pressure than do students who must choose their wardrobes. this is because school uniforms allow students and their parents to save money and time. the financial investment in uniforms at the beginning of the school year is far more economical than the purchase of an entire wardrobe of designer clothes and trendy styles. students who do not have to deliberate what to wear each morning are able to invest their time in more productive ways, such as studying for tests or finishing homework. uniforms may stifle students’ self-expression, but there are many other ways to reveal one’s individuality at school.

which revision would best strengthen the author’s main argument?
the omission of the author’s point of view
the addition of more general statements and ideas
the correction of spelling and punctuation errors
the inclusion of reputable sources and specific facts

The inclusion of reputable sources and specific facts.

Explanation:

This paragraph is in the format of a persuasive article. If you have the opinion of other humans, specifically from students and teachers then you can better understand both sides. When an article does not have these elements and it is persuasive in some form, then the grip the author has on the reader isn't really strong, and tends to make readers ask: "Says who?"

the star of david was known as the jewish star : d

the main character of "the secret life of walter mitty" retreats into a false pretense as a means escape from his mundane reality -- this is a flagrant issue seen in societies abroad, typically found in young adults and it is robbing our youths of their childhood.

explanation:

a thesis -- a well developed, formal thesis is required to be one sentence long. there are many themes in "the secret life of walter mitty" and i had resolved to give you one of the simpler ones while still honing it with class.