Can someone analyze my poem i wrote for my girlfriend? we have been dating a while and this is the first poem i have ever written. and she is fascinated by the stars
the stars:

out of the vast selection of stars
that line up so absolute in the night
i fine one star irregularly mislaid
onestar so contrasting to the vast selection

i find myself short of breath and astonished
to discover something so alluring
out of the vast selection of stars
i believe i have found my star.

you so much!