(13) justice and hatred are both strong forces, but another theme that is apparent in many different situations in the scarlet letter is that sympathy can be a more powerful force than either hatred or justice. which is the best way to rewrite this sentence? justice and hatred are both strong forces, but not as strong as sympathy, which is more powerful than both, which is a theme of the scarlet letter. justice and hatred, both less strong than sympathy, is also illustrated throughout the scarlet letter in theme. one theme that is apparent throughout the scarlet letter is that sympathy is a powerful force, and justice and hatred are also strong, but not as strong. another theme illustrated throughout the scarlet letter is that sympathy can be a more powerful force than either hatred or justice.

Another theme illustrated throughout The Scarlet Letter is that sympathy can be a more powerful force than either hatred or justice.

Explanation:

When one sentence is rewritten the most important part is doing it without changing the meaning of what is been said in the original sentence. To keep the meaning of it there are many options like: reordering elements; reducing the sentence for making it shorter; avoiding repeating worlds or making substitution of words for synonyms. Like in this option:

Justice and hatred are both strong forces, but (this part is cut to make it shorter) another theme that is apparent in many different situations in (this part is substituted for 'illustrated throughout') The Scarlet Letter is that sympathy can be a more powerful force than either hatred or justice.

i don't think that you should. it looks amazing to me! it is definitely a lot better than the things that i can draw ; ~ ;