Read this conclusion of an argumentative essay.

our national parks are special. most people know that, but there are a few who still have not gotten the memo. those individuals need to understand that there are a lot of benefits we get by taking care of those places. they need to get out of their houses and take a few vacations in those parks. catch sight of some deer or some wolves or some bears. go camping and pick some wildflowers. pretty soon they will see how much better nature is than their television set.

this conclusion could be more successful if the writer revised by

adding a new claim and generating good reasons.

adding more reasons and credible sources.

adding more transitions and creating a more respectful tone.

adding more evidence and a few more transitions.

teenagers are certainly stereotyped as moody.

most people view teenagers as naturally moody and grumpy, even when this is wrong. many teens are suffering from depression but it is brushed off as "just a phase" or "that's just cause they're a teenager"

not exaxtly

explanation: it depends on the situation like if u do something good there will be good consequences which arent punishments but if you do somthing bad there will be bad consequences which are punishements.

scout gets in a bad position on the primary day of school since she can read and on the grounds that she can compose. she likewise gets in a bad position for explaining to miss caroline that she shouldn't attempt … to loan cash to walter on the grounds that he won't take it since he is to poor to pay it back.

it is c because i got it right on my test