Read the passage. (1) are your students failing? (2) get them . (3) call tutorific, it’s the best tutoring service in town. (4) our tutors are experienced. (5) they undergo extensive training. (6) this makes tutorific’s tutors the best. (7) in a study, tutorific tutoring raised students’ test scores 40 percent. which revision does the passage need? elaborating on why tutorific tutors are effective rewriting to correct the run-on in sentence 3 adding a clear statement of purpose cutting the statistic in sentence 7

rewriting to correct the run-on in sentence 3

Explanation:

A run-on sentence is a type of error which occurs when two independent clauses are incorrectly joined (i.e. they lack proper conjunction and/or punctuation).

Sentence 3 is a run-on because you can't join two independent clauses with a comma. You need also a coordinating conjunction to use before the second clause.

Call Tutorific, it’s the best tutoring service in town. (Incorrect)

Call Tutorific, for it’s the best tutoring service in town. (Correct)

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