Ihave to write a "where i'm from" poem for school. can someone tell me if this is good or

where i’m from:
i am from loud singing crowds
i am from big family to country words
i am from saying “yeehaw” to “hey y’all”
i am from “jesus saved us” to “god loves his sons and daughters”
i am from stuffing on to turkey on christmas
i am from “you’re ugly” to “the most heavenly father stated that you are beautiful just like everyone else”
i am from half family country to half being city.
i am from “the mockingbird” to “the raven”
i am from “he did this” to “he did that”
i am from “she said this” to “she said that”
i am from “feeling down” to “feeling up”
i am from back roads to city palace
i am from nana’s house to my aunt’s houses
i am from family being annoying to family being lovely.
i am from small town to big town.

I really like this! My only input for you would be to remove a couple "I am" statements. For example:

"I am from big family to country words/From saying 'Yeehaw' to 'Hey y'all'"

It just makes it flow better.

Fantastic work!!!

explanatithe story "two kinds" , revolves around a strict relationship between a mother and daughter. the mother tries very hard to make sure her daughter jing mei , is successful in life and lives up to her full potential. the story explores alot of different themes. though , there is one theme that really stands out. you cant force someone to be something that their not.

jing mei's mother was an immagrant from china. she moved to the united states to give her daughter , jing mei , a better and successful life for her. and being raised in china with their strict rules and striving to be perfect took a toll on her and her daughters relationship. she pressures her daughter to be great and perfect all the time but it gets really hard for her to live up to her mothers standards. her mother believes that jing mei can be a child prodigy and prepares her to be and act like one. furthermore , the story ends with jing mei getting everything off her chest and seeing the dissappointment in her mothers eyes as she finds out her daughter has not lived up to her full potential. and her mother has finally gained an understanding of her daughter.

tbh ur lucky i answered because you only gave 5 points. it should have been like 50.

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