Does this sound good
she pulled up in a pickup she was beautiful i have never seen a girl like that before i should have said hello to her but instead, i found her in my morning class in my seat ''um hi im mark and you're in my seat '' i think i sounded rude but she know what i meat ''um sorry im miami and i didn't know there were assigned seats in high school but i could move but i kinda like my back at the wall'' he looked me up and down ''um