While she slept the alarm kept ringing in jamie's ear. according to the elements of style, what is the correct way to revise this sentence? while she slept, the alarm kept ringing in jamie's ear. the alarm kept ringing in jamie's ear, while she slept. the alarm kept ringing while she slept in jamie's ear. no change

While she slept, the alarm kept ringing in Jamie's ear.

Explanation:

You need to put a comma after the word "slept".

While she slept, the alarm kept ringing in Jamie's ear.

Explanation:

You need to separate the different ideas in the sentence, in this case the separation should be inserted after the word Slept, because that is where the first idea is closed, and after that the sentence should continue to express what the sentence wants to express about the sentence. In that case that was the complementary idea, the fact that the alarm was ringing in Jamie´s ear.

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