(can someone look over my essay and see if it's good and if not can someone me fix it.) read the three text-passages. type an argument essay taking a stand on the issue. use relevant evidence from the texts to introduce your claim and acknowledge alternate or opposing claims as well as provide a rebuttal. ( use mla citations. ) support your opinion with logical reasoning and relevant evidence. use transitions to clarify ideas and concepts. provide a conclusion that evokes emotion or a call for action in the reader. here's what i have written so far. ( owning an exotic pets and wild animals can sometimes cause endangerment to people and there community. the exotic and wild animals as pet's they are very hard to maintain. and putting them in a cage is not all that great for them. they need to be able to have plenty of room to run around and play. that's there nature. if the animals need medical attention the veterinarian might be able to the animals or they might not be able to . taking care of big exotic and wild animals is way to expensive and can cause harm to there selves. when most of them are circling around and pacing they are probably in attack mode. there should definitely be alot of rules and regulations for every state and country. i think the law should make them have a suitable place to live and a big huge cage where they can run around and play and get lots of exercise. the exotic and wild animals need to stay active so they dont get bored. this is part of there nature. the rules should be made where they have someone from the state and someone from animal control come out once a week to check and make sure that the exotic and wild animals are living in a good environment and are being well maintained and to check and see if there healthy. i personally think exotic and wild pets should live in wild. these animals need to be able to hunt there on food and run around freely. these animals are alot smarter than humans. i'm pretty sure they can find a way to get out of there cage. it has happened all over the world. and when they do escape their owners are putting there community in alot of danger. also if this happens their owner's should get a big huge fine and jail time. instead of putting the exotic and wild animals in a zoo they should put them back in the wild where they belong. hopefully they'll be able to adapt back into the wild life and hunt for there prey and habitat.) taking notes: behavioral, trauma, removal of teeth and claws, dangerous, domesticated, pace or circle repeatedly. write an argument taking a stand on exotic animals as pets. should people be allowed to own wild or exotic animals as pets or should there be stricter regulations on what pet's people can have? use evidence from the texts you have read as well as your own ideas. if you have already down this assignment or wrote it for someone else don't write the same thing down. need to get a really good grade. also need asap.