Ineed to write a response to an english prompt. there is no specified length it just says "write a thoughtful response" i need someone to: proofread tell me if you think the response should be longer or if it is good (this is for 12th grade) and tell me where i could add "elevated vocabulary" three times. this year i have grown as a writer by practicing specific writing strategies. in previous years the flow in my essays was less than satisfactory, so i worked on organizing my thoughts and sentences to make my pieces easier to read. i learned how to start a paragraph with one main idea and have the rest of the sentences relate to that idea. organizing your paragraphs is the same as organizing things in your room.