Write a single scene about an important fictional event. the scene must establish a clear point of view and take place in a well-described setting. the scene may be about anything you can imagine as long as you describe it clearly, it may be a self-contained story or a single chapter in an ongoing storyyour scene should include the following elements- a fictional event of some kind, such as an important conversation or a major discovery- a point of view, which may be first person, third-person limited, or third-person omniscient• a setting that lets the reader know the place and time in which your event occurs• at least one narrative technique from the lesson, such as dialogue

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

being ignored by someone and then accepting the fact was really tough

to gain popularity at school, fitzgerald wrote plays for the school and cast himself as the star. he also joined one of the universitys most prestigious clubs.

yeah uhm looks pretty good lol