Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly?

"the news reporter said the parade has been postponed," holly announced.
"then we can go to the park instead," cory suggested.
"i'll pack a cooler with food," brianna said. then she added, "this will be a lot of fun."

a. incorrectly

b. correctly

Me with english (easy for you) 50 points

Read this excerpt from "the all-american slurp." i pulled the strings out of my stalk. z-z-zip, z-z-zip. my brother followed suit. z-z-zip, z-z-zip. to my left, my parents were taking care of their own stalks. z-z-zip, z-z-zip, z-z-zip. suddenly i realized that there was dead silence except for our zipping. looking up, i saw that the eyes of everyone in the room were on our family. mr. and mrs. gleason, their daughter meg, who was my friend, and their neighbors the badels—they were all staring at us as we busily pulled the strings of our celery. what story element does the author develop in this excerpt? a) lot details about the party b) characterization of the lins c) characterization of the gleasons d) setting details about the gleasons’ house

In 1957, lester b. pearson sent peacekeepers to the middle east. subject of verb