Ihave to write an essay about what animal i prefer out of cats and dogs. this is what i wrote, i need someone to look through this and make improvements where needed. you!
the everlasting question, cats or dogs. some favor one over the other; like them both or don’t like either of them. i personally prefer cats for many reasons. they have a lot of personality, they are more independent and their owner’s health benefits from them.
in my opinion, cats have more personality than dogs because they don’t follow your every command. if they want to knock a cup over they’ll do it regardless of you telling them not to. if they don’t want to do something you can’t force them to do it.
secondly, cats are more independent than dogs because you don’t have to take them for walks to keep them healthy. cats can also use the bathroom by themselves rather than having to be let out like dogs do.
lastly, humans health benefit from having a cat. they reduce stress, immune system, lower risk of heart disease and many more.
for these reasons cats are the superior animal of the two.

It's really good! But maybe replace the word "they" woth other words cause you use it frequently

Explanation:

the anwser is went creeping down the river again, across the wide lonely marshes to the sea.

i longed to go with them out into the world to seek my fortune in foreign lands—africa, india, china and peru!

and, dreaming of the lands i had never seen, i'd sit on there, watching till they were out of sight.

as we know, the english language is spoken all over the world by native and non-native speakers and has become the most certain tool when it comes to communicating. businesses, schools, even romantic relationships depend on it to keep thriving. in addition, it is the language of the internet not only because most of the content available is in english, but also because people prefer to use it when talking to others, since it's the language everyone supposedly learns.

yet, there have been some current claims that chinese will soon take over as the most important language in the world. china's magnitude has never been more evident and doing business with the chinese is a gold mine for any country. we now see language schools offering chinese courses as commonly as english.

however - even though we cannot deny china's importance and the advantage it is when someone takes the time to learn the language their business contact speaks-, people in general seem to be ignoring the aspects that seem to keep english as the chosen one of languages. one of them has been mentioned above: it is the language of the internet. also, chinese people are still learning english, since it opens doors in communicating with practically everyone else, from every single country.

note: if this is not the sort of transition you need, let me know. : d