How could a change in emphasis best develop the events in this passage, making for a more interesting and exciting read?
the author could spend even more time discussing the preparations for takeoff.
the author could shorten details about mckee's preparations and describe how exciting and dangerous the rocket flight was and tell the
adventures that took place during colonization of saturn
the author could list and explain the different dials and switches in the cockpit to show how the advanced technology of the shuttle works, with
plenty of intricate technical detail
the author could focus the story solely on mckee's careful preparation for the trip, noting what he had for lunch and the clothes he wore.

in this alternate universe, renaissance romeo is now seventeen, an apprentice to a glass maker in venice. modern romeo is planning to go to college. what major do you think he’ll elect?

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wordsworth tends to see nature as 'out there'; a presence which surrounds humans, and contributes to human life, but is different from humans. if you look at a typical wordsworth poem (there was a boy, ye knew him well ye rocks) - wordsworth talks about nature as something that needs to be learned about and understood, nature is different from us.  

if you look at a byron poem (the isles of greece is a good one) - byron looks at nature mainly for what it already means to man. wordsworth will look at a landscape and see the mountains, trees, valleys, and rivers as almost spiritual presences - wordsworth wants to get to know nature.  

byron will look at the same landscape and he will want to know who lives there, what are the villages? are there any farms or mines, is there some history?  

wordsworth looks at nature for what it is; byron is forever asking what it means.  

wordsworth thinks that humans are part of nature; byron thinks that nature is part of being human

the original because it was the first to be created which means it is most likely to be tried the hardest. meaning the actors tried their hardest to make it right because shakespeare was so famous.

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