Apossible disadvantage to watching this scene, as opposed to reading it silently, is that viewers are
unable to infer the characters' emotions for themselves.
unable to interpret the stage directions for themselves
forced to imagine the appearance of the characters.
forced to visualize the props used within the scene.
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i think you should write from the heart and think what truely makes a hero. i can’t do this for you. even though this is it’s up to you.

either a donut or a sphere or a pancake or a flat sphere. it depends on where the vertical line is.

if the line goes through the center of the circle and is perpendicular to a diameter containing the center, then you get a flat circle.

if the line and the diameter of a the circle meet in the center of the diameter and at an angle, you get a pancake.

if the line is on the circumference of the circle and is at right angles   to the circle you get a ring.

if the line contains the diameter, you get a sphere.

the the line is parallel to the diameter and touches the circumference, you get a donut.