Can someone me? i've been asking people but they haven't 's been more than 7 hours and no response. i'm trying to make sure my fictional narrative fits the rubric. what are some changes i
should make if so?

rubric:

-use colorful dialogue to effectively reveal character and to move the plot forward 10pt.
-use vivid sensory imagery to establish a clear mood
5pt.
-maintain a consistent point of view (only 1st person or 3rd person, i chose 1st person.)
5pt.
-use chronological order to effectively construct a fictional narrative
5pt.
-present writing that is free of grammatical or spelling errors
5pt.
-include a wide variety of simple, compound, and complex sentences
5pt.
-demonstrate perfectly consistent verb tense
5pt.

You have got them all correct. Also that was a wonderful essay!

answer: b. grete might have remained as shy and immature as she was at the beginning of the story.

one of the most interesting characteristics of gregor's metamorphosis is that, although he is the only character who has physically changed, it is this same change which triggered a transformation in the rest of his family.

by taking care of gregor, grete has become stronger and more confident. she has found a life outside of the house, and has become more independent and self-sufficient. the novel implies that the trigger for the change is gregor's own transformation, and that without it, grete was likely to remain as shy and immature as she was at the beginning of the book.

explanation:

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