Read the paragraph from kevin’s personal narrative. 1. when i was in fifth grade, my family became interested in fostering kittens from the local animal shelter. 2. first, we had to fill out an application. 3. next, we had to attend a workshop on caring for kittens properly. 4. a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. 5. finally, we were approved. 6. that was an exciting day! which is the best revision of sentence 4? after that, a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. she came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. finally, a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. i came our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.

After that, a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.

Explanation:

In a text, we can read about a boy and his family who want to foster kittens. This short story is written chronologically. A few steps are followed. Best revision on sentence 4 must include a timeline or some words that include that something is coming after sentence 3. There are few offered answers, but the only correct answer is one that includes after that as a logical sequence of events.

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I believe this would be the correct answer A: After that, a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.

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